Some pseudo poet folks, smitten by 5 lines,smiles,and lots of fun.....We like to comment on the state of our world in limerick form. Not that it improves the world, but it just might be improving our thinking, seeing, and writing.....
Wednesday, June 22, 2011
Second Honeymoon
A sixty year marathi manoos went to Kulu
Accompanied by his darling wife called Sulu
He decided to play it safe,
As [he thought] she was going deaf,
People said "Honeymooners, Speak halu halu"
Ani jhalya gappa goshti suru Jorjorat va halu halu They cursed that horrible khadoos Said "amchya bhangadeet nako padoos" And to each other said "Aata aapan ithoon paloo".
Some like prose and some like verse, Enjoy these lines that we disburse, We do the stuff in fun, And should you not like one, Please feel free, below, to curse ......
Ha ha! This is the sweetest limerick I have read :)
ReplyDeleteBrilliant!
ReplyDeleteThanks Neha and Ugich Konitari.
ReplyDeleteVivek
This picture is lovely and the Prose 'too good'!!!
ReplyDeleteaawww how sweet is that :)
ReplyDeleteLol! this is really funny, uncle! :)
ReplyDeletethat funny and sweet...my dad has started singing on the same lines :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome
ReplyDeleteVivek,
ReplyDeleteNicely rhymed.
Take care
Ani jhalya gappa goshti suru
ReplyDeleteJorjorat va halu halu
They cursed that horrible khadoos
Said "amchya bhangadeet nako padoos"
And to each other said "Aata aapan ithoon paloo".
Good one Vivek.
LOL...nice one
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